Kia ora Shoneve, your final comment is much better than your first one, so well done. Think about dividing your comment into sentences, eg put a full stop after your 'well done'. And remember when you post to your blog, include a couple of sentences to describe your work and what you learnt.
Kia ora Shoneve, your final comment is much better than your first one, so well done. Think about dividing your comment into sentences, eg put a full stop after your 'well done'. And remember when you post to your blog, include a couple of sentences to describe your work and what you learnt.
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